If I could try to pull you aside
Just for a brief moment
A moment from time
It's all I would ask
To perform a difficult task
I just need to tell you
So at least you know
Oh, I'm such scum
Could we do this alone?
Because it chews to the bone
And I get so angry
I hate using the phone
Whenever you speak to me
I begin to hate
Everyone else in this room
Because for me it's much too late
And I know from these words
Flowing from that beautiful mouth
They mean so much more to me
Then those who think with his south.
Oh, I'm so disgusting
Coudl we do this alone?
Away from this heavy phone
Because I get so pissed
And it affects my tone.
Allow me to look in those very deep eyes
I know I don't deserve it
Because it's me you despise.
I'm getting so mad
It hurts my head
Because when I catch your scent
All I see is red.
I'm getting so pissed
I'll cuss and hiss
Pound on the wall
Screams instead of sobs
It won't cease at all
My throat will throb.
I just need to f**king tell you.
Oh, my love
Could we do this alone?
I'll reveal skin under stone
And you'll always know
I will love you till death
And still after my final breath
Outlasting our time
Your lips moving with mine.
Could we do this alone?
Could we do this alone?
Nevermind. I'll just take you home.
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You have FANTASTIC writing talent.
D:
Don't be a negative arse.
It's beautiful, thoughtful poetry and it deserves to be published.
So there.
<3
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Diamond, the Internet Space Pirate of E.V.I.L.
Forgive me for being so stupid.
It won't happen again.
I don't deserve all the things you all say.
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In Canada, it's illegal to jump from a flying airplane without a parachute.
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Stop bein' so put-down-self.
It doens't suit you.
-hug-
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Diamond, the Internet Space Pirate of E.V.I.L.
I'll try better.
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In Canada, it's illegal to jump from a flying airplane without a parachute.
But my writing always seems to sound like a corny lulluby or a nursery rhyme *shudders* PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!
I wish I could here you sing this. Have you made music to go with it?
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We sit like Cats on rooftops...
I'll keep writing for you.
I would absolutely love to read something that you wrote.
I'm sure it would be nicer than mine. Positive.
Yeah I've been humming it to myself then slowly starting to sing and attemting a beat. I have a bass solo in my head that I'm trying to put together for it too.
I just hope I can make it sound the way I want everyone else to hear it.
Thanks for being my friend.
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In Canada, it's illegal to jump from a flying airplane without a parachute.
YAY MORE WRITING WOOT!!!
I don't know about people seeing my writing though
Ooo Yay that will sound so kewl. Do you play an instrument... I myself play Violin hehe classical posh music is what I play... but not what I listen to.
NO PROBLEM!! I enjoy being your friend and am extremely excited that you are mine
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We sit like Cats on rooftops...
I haven't played the bass in a while though for some reasons...
I'm thinking about picking it back up again.
YOU play the violin? Thats amazing.
Post your writing!! Please?! I'll only keep writing if you post at least ONE piece of poetry....
Ha-HA! I'm waiting.....
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In Canada, it's illegal to jump from a flying airplane without a parachute.
You should definately pick it up again.. music is another way people express themselves... plus you can create really cool sounds... and in this case you can make your song sound awesome! Even MORE awesome than it already sounds. You must record it and send it to me.. hehe
Haha Yes I do play Violin... it's actually the same notes as the bass guitar so I might pick it up...
Ok ok ill see what I can find of what ive written... I haven't written in ages, YEARS almost so I might create a new one.... then you can say how crappy it is.
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We sit like Cats on rooftops...
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